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A short fic
Tried to do a fic based on chapter 185.
Title: Wrong
Character: Allen Walker
Summary: His oath to himself and to Mana prevents him from standing still and let this monstrosity be. But he could not destroy them like he did akuma either. It felt wrong.
Go deeper to a world darker than black, brighter than white...
In truth he wanted to scream. Although his honed poker face belied his inner turmoil, Allen Walker found that he was breaking.
My left, I give you to the akuma.
Akuma are pitiful beings. There is no freedom for the soul entrapped within an akuma, and they become the Earl's toy for all eternity.
That was why he fought—to free the imprisoned souls.
My right, I give you to the humans.
Those crow members. It was hard to believe that something like converting humans to half akuma was possible. Moreover, Why?
If humans condemned themselves to that existence, then...
Both are part of me. Both are equally important to me.
He felt guilty. For bringing the ark along with the akuma egg.
He felt sadness. For those humans who were condemned.
He felt sympathy. For their souls and fate.
Worst of all, he felt betrayed.
I decided to save them both.
His oath to himself and to Mana prevents him from standing still and let this monstrosity be. But he could not destroy them like he did akuma either. It felt wrong.
Don't Stop. Keep moving forth.
It wound him so deep that he began self doubting. Could he keep moving forward when everything felt so wrong? When he was shattered more and more each time?
Even so, Allen Walker prayed that the inevitable day when he stopped moving would not come. Because despite it all, he still want to save them all.
My first fic is done! Sorry for the crappy title.
Critics and comments are welcomed, and please correct me if there's any mistake. The help would be much appreciated, plus it would really help me improve from a newbie writer :)
Title: Wrong
Character: Allen Walker
Summary: His oath to himself and to Mana prevents him from standing still and let this monstrosity be. But he could not destroy them like he did akuma either. It felt wrong.
Go deeper to a world darker than black, brighter than white...
In truth he wanted to scream. Although his honed poker face belied his inner turmoil, Allen Walker found that he was breaking.
My left, I give you to the akuma.
Akuma are pitiful beings. There is no freedom for the soul entrapped within an akuma, and they become the Earl's toy for all eternity.
That was why he fought—to free the imprisoned souls.
My right, I give you to the humans.
Those crow members. It was hard to believe that something like converting humans to half akuma was possible. Moreover, Why?
If humans condemned themselves to that existence, then...
Both are part of me. Both are equally important to me.
He felt guilty. For bringing the ark along with the akuma egg.
He felt sadness. For those humans who were condemned.
He felt sympathy. For their souls and fate.
Worst of all, he felt betrayed.
I decided to save them both.
His oath to himself and to Mana prevents him from standing still and let this monstrosity be. But he could not destroy them like he did akuma either. It felt wrong.
Don't Stop. Keep moving forth.
It wound him so deep that he began self doubting. Could he keep moving forward when everything felt so wrong? When he was shattered more and more each time?
Even so, Allen Walker prayed that the inevitable day when he stopped moving would not come. Because despite it all, he still want to save them all.
My first fic is done! Sorry for the crappy title.
Critics and comments are welcomed, and please correct me if there's any mistake. The help would be much appreciated, plus it would really help me improve from a newbie writer :)
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It's nice to know the two days I spent mulling over this fic aren't wasted.
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I liked how you wrote it, good job!
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I was a bit worried that I mashed up too many things in this fic, but you cleared that up for me :D
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That part is my favorite too, and actually I made the entire fic from that part.