ext_310721 ([identity profile] kupodesu.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] dgray_man 2009-09-26 08:46 am (UTC)

This was beautiful, I love the way you wrote this piece. My favourite bits were about Lavi's cracking mask, and the end part ('Hey, hey, wanna help me paint the sky?' ) AND ALSO that little detail with Allen and the 14th answering together, it added a nice little touch that I don't know how to explain. I love the ending line as well, it was a nice little way to close off this piece, makes me think that things are going to slowly get better ♥

Extra kudos for giving Klaud a part! It's rare to see her in fanfics. And one final thing; that's such an adorable picture and I think the way you interpreted it (or wrote a fic inspired by it, same thing ahaha) was absolutely beautiful.

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