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[laifan.livejournal.com]

Hey guys. I bring you a fanfiction. My first in the D Gray Man fandom.

Title: What They See
Fandom: D Gray Man
Rating: PG
Characters: Allen Walker, Kanda Yuu, Lavi, Linali Li, Miranda Lotto and Komui Li
Chapters: will eventually have 5, each in a character's POV

What Allen Walker Sees...

Comments

[mittens-220.livejournal.com]

I like this story! Your writing style is nice, although there were some spelling/grammar errors (eg. invaded not evaded).
Keep up the great work and please update soon!

[laifan.livejournal.com]

Oh okay. I'll see if I correct that then ^^ Thanks.