http://mittens-220.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] mittens-220.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] dgray_man 2009-04-12 02:27 am (UTC)

I like this story! Your writing style is nice, although there were some spelling/grammar errors (eg. invaded not evaded).
Keep up the great work and please update soon!
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