ext_315289 ([identity profile] kowaiki.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] dgray_man2009-04-14 12:32 am

Reason for the 14th's betrayal

I'm sure most people have thought or discussed about it.



Some love for the Noah clan~





I'm so lazy I didn't draw a single background for page 1.

Liked it? You will be loved if you comment ^_^



D.Gray-man has been taking up too many hours of my day lately XD Not sure if it's a bad thing.

[identity profile] white-arc.livejournal.com 2009-04-13 03:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Che, it wasn't the Earls fault, it was the families. Who knew? The Earl should give them all a time out for that.

My only problem is that you pretty much killed Allen in order to make this. But that's all. =P

[identity profile] sadistic-brat.livejournal.com 2009-04-13 05:54 pm (UTC)(link)

LOL. Pure love. ^~^ Although it IS true... all the Noahs have different problems. Haha.

^_^ Really loved this though. And I loved the way you drew Noah!Allen... Smexy~~ XP

[identity profile] obsessed-love.livejournal.com 2009-04-13 06:55 pm (UTC)(link)
LMAO!!

Ah yes, now it's so clear as to why he left! XD

[identity profile] closeincline.livejournal.com 2009-04-13 07:49 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL So funny!!! I might leave too!!

[identity profile] zettafae.livejournal.com 2009-04-13 10:09 pm (UTC)(link)
That is really really cute! So instead of the Noahs he would rather be with the Exorcists. Great tradeoff.

[identity profile] kupodesu.livejournal.com 2009-04-14 12:04 am (UTC)(link)
LOL good one! :P Poor guy. Your drawing is really cute, and this story was just hilarious. Makes me wish it really was this simple in canon, just for less Allen-brain-breaking.

[identity profile] mittens-220.livejournal.com 2009-04-14 12:11 am (UTC)(link)
This is funny XD If I had that kind of family, I'll leave too.

[identity profile] miraofazuresky.livejournal.com 2009-04-14 02:13 am (UTC)(link)
I love it. <3

In manga-canon I pretty much hate the Fourteenth for the trouble he's causing Allen (I'm reminded a little of Lia and D'Eon de Beaumont from Le Chevalier D'Eon...) but in this comic he's absolutely LOVE, so congrats. <33

And his reasons seem like good ones to me, as well. ^^

[identity profile] innoc3nt-sorrow.livejournal.com 2009-04-14 08:15 am (UTC)(link)
i like how you drew the 14th 8D

if my family was like that, i'd leave.

although the Order isn't that wonderful either. like for example, in order for that to happen, he even had to be stuck with a beansprout aka Allen. which indirectly means getting teased by everyone. D:

[identity profile] zettafae.livejournal.com 2009-04-14 08:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah, exactly!

[identity profile] ashuratou.livejournal.com 2009-08-02 03:24 am (UTC)(link)
hahahaha. nice excuse allen