Sorry this took me awhile, but here's the fourth section of Rabi's story from the 2nd Reverse novel by Kizaki Kaya. Enjoy!
Critique, suggestions, and other feedback regarding my translation are highly appreciated. If you catch any typos, let me know and I'll fix 'em. Also, I have a question--how have other people translated Rabi's
Ohzuchi, kozuchi and
man commands when he uses his hammer? And which version sounds best to you? I left them as is in my translation, but I'd like to know what people prefer.
( Previous Translations )( The 49th Name Part 4 )ETA: Now I have some fanart to share, of the
usual people.